Ava James ~ Romance To Last A Lifetime

Ok, so I am reworking a story, like I said before. Problem is that I am finding many of the things I have written are not adequatley expressing what I feel or want to convey with it.
It is hard to write something that can evoke those feelings in the reader. You could say She felt this but that is not the point of writing. I don;t just want to tell a story, I want the reader to feel for the story while I tell it.
It is hard to say what you feel and I am just wrestling with that now.